Your analysis is more of a description, Ben. In order to get higher marks, you need to always say WHY the company has done things or WHAT EFFECT it has on an audience. For example, rather than saying "the chocolate is called galaxy" (an F grade), you could say "the chocolate is called galaxy because this suggests to the audience that this product is out of this world and heaven like." (B grade). Please feel free to improve these in your own time if you would like higher marks.
Your analysis is more of a description, Ben. In order to get higher marks, you need to always say WHY the company has done things or WHAT EFFECT it has on an audience. For example, rather than saying "the chocolate is called galaxy" (an F grade), you could say "the chocolate is called galaxy because this suggests to the audience that this product is out of this world and heaven like." (B grade). Please feel free to improve these in your own time if you would like higher marks.
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