Your analysis is more of a description, Ben. In order to get higher marks, you need to always say WHY the company has done things or WHAT EFFECT it has on an audience. For example, rather than saying "the people doing the advert are Cristiano Ronaldo" (an F grade), you could say "I have chosen Christiano Ronalo to endorse my boots in my advert as it will attract it his fans to buy the boots. Having a celebrity in the advert will also make the boots seem extra special and luxurious." (B grade). Please feel free to improve these in your own time if you would like higher marks.
Your analysis is more of a description, Ben. In order to get higher marks, you need to always say WHY the company has done things or WHAT EFFECT it has on an audience. For example, rather than saying "the people doing the advert are Cristiano Ronaldo" (an F grade), you could say "I have chosen Christiano Ronalo to endorse my boots in my advert as it will attract it his fans to buy the boots. Having a celebrity in the advert will also make the boots seem extra special and luxurious." (B grade). Please feel free to improve these in your own time if you would like higher marks.
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