Your analysis is more of a description, Ben. In order to get higher marks, you need to always say WHY the company has done things or WHAT EFFECT it has on an audience. For example, rather than saying "the slogan is going down in history" (an E/F grade), you could say "the slogan is going down in history, which suggests to the audience that if they buy the PS3, they will be famous, or be able to play games that will be famous." (B grade). Please feel free to improve these in your own time if you would like higher marks.
Your analysis is more of a description, Ben. In order to get higher marks, you need to always say WHY the company has done things or WHAT EFFECT it has on an audience. For example, rather than saying "the slogan is going down in history" (an E/F grade), you could say "the slogan is going down in history, which suggests to the audience that if they buy the PS3, they will be famous, or be able to play games that will be famous." (B grade). Please feel free to improve these in your own time if you would like higher marks.
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